Dear, you readin' this I won't say trivial things here, i'd betta come and tell you all in person! Although thousand kilometers separates us, we will meet nevertheless, i know that! I will tell you how awesome your smile is, what a pretty little nose you have and regarding the fact that you don't call me What you think i would like most? I would like to touch your hair, with tender touch. I would remember that for the rest of my life.

Хм я бы мог немного точнее перевести но просмотрев текст могу сказать - сойдет!

В слове separates убери s на конце

и добавь still плюс глагол для образования времени

Dear you're still reading this

Спасибо большое , выручили !

C s на конце звучит привычнее и натуральнее

С "still" смысл фразы будет искажен. Дорогая ты ВСЕ ЕЩЕ читаешь это...

The sun, you feel like it chitaesh nehochu I speak standard speech, I better come and tell everyone in person! Though thousands of miles in the distance, but we are with you see you, I know! And then I say about your unforgettable smile, akkuratnenky and spout about what you even nezvonish .... I wanted to most? -- I would like to touch your hair, gently - gently .. I would remember it for life.


гуголь

как это мииило....^_^ тож хотю чтоб мну кто нить тякие слова скал =((

Я бы сказал, да я бы еще и станцевал

станцуй =)